Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-ietf-pim-mib-v2-09.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Review Date: 23 January 2007 IETF LC Date: 11 January 2007 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: RFC 3376, RFC 3569, RFC 3618, and RFC 3810 appear in the References section but do not seem to be used anywhere in the text. The last paragraph of the Introduction, which contains a reference to RFC 2119, typically appears in a separate section called "Terminology", right after the Introduction. Thanks, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
