I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-mip4-mobike-connectivity-02.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Review Date: 2007-01-28
IETF LC End Date: 2007-02-06.
Summary: The draft is ready for publication as a BCP.
Comments:
- idnits reflects a couple of nits that should be solved.
- The third line of the draft indicates that the intended status is
"Standards Track", however, the information I got from the Gen-ART team
is that the intended status of this draft is BCP. Just clarify, the RFC
Editor may also get confused with these two opposite pieces of information.
- Section 2: the first and the last paragraphs in this section are the
same. One of them should be deleted.
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia tel:+358-50-4804586
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Nokia Research Center Helsinki, Finland
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