I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-isis-link-attr-03.txt Reviewer: David Black Review Date: 2 March 2007 IETF LC End Date: 12 March 2007 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: This is a short draft that defines a link attributes extension to IS-IS plus the first two attributes that it carries. One has to be an IS-IS expert to fully understand this draft - that's quite reasonable for this sort of draft. The Abstract should say that TLV 22 is the extended IS reachability TLV. idnits 2.03.11 finds the downref noted in the Last Call, flags [IS-IS] as a possible downref (as an ISO standard it's definitely not a downref), and says that page 4 has 59 lines (vs. 58 max). Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Senior Technologist EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 [EMAIL PROTECTED] Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ---------------------------------------------------- _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
