It should be forwarded to the editor of the document as Syam Madanapalli. Syam, please reflect the comments below.
-- Daniel Park Chair, 16NG Working Group > -----Original Message----- > From: Gonzalo Camarillo [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: Thursday, March 29, 2007 6:55 PM > To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > Cc: Jari Arkko; [email protected]; > [EMAIL PROTECTED]; [EMAIL PROTECTED] > Subject: Gen-art review of > draft-ietf-16ng-ipv6-link-model-analysis-03.txt > > Hi, > > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team > (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, > please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD > before posting a new version of the draft. > > > Draft: draft-ietf-16ng-ipv6-link-model-analysis-03.txt > Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > Review Date: 29 March 2007 > > Summary: > > This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. > > > Comments: > > Acronyms (e.g., MS, BS, and MLD) should be expanded on their > first use. > > The draft talks about WiMAX defining the WiMAX transport > connection but does not provide a reference. > > > Thanks, > > Gonzalo > > > > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
