I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-sipping-dialogusage-06 Reviewer: Pasi Eronen Review Date: 04 May 2007 IETF LC End Date: 10 May 2007 IESG Telechat date: (not known yet) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Comments: I'm not a SIP expert, but this looks quite solid. Some editorial suggestions: RFC editor nowadays recommends using symbolic references (e.g. [RFC3911] instead of [5]); and abbreviations should be expanded on first use (e.g. KPLM, UA, UAC, UAS, and GRUU). Best regards, Pasi _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
