I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-te-node-cap-05 Reviewer: Pasi Eronen Review Date: 30 May 2007 IETF LC End Date: 06 June 2007 IESG Telechat date: (not known yet) Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: 1) Section 8.2 "[IS-IS-CAP] defines a new code point registry for sub-TLVs carried in the ISIS CAPABILITY TLV". The current version of [IS-IS-CAP] does not seem to define any new IANA-maintained registries. This may be an bug in [IS-IS-CAP]? 2) Section 8.3: the bit numbers in this section don't match the bit numbers in Sections 4.1/4.2. 3) As noted in the proto write-up, there's a normative downref (RFC 3784). This downref was not called out in the IETF last call message, and it's not listed in the downref registry. Best regards, Pasi _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
