Richard,
thanks for the notifications of progress.
> David,
> I incorporated your changes except one, and made some other minor
> changes.
>
> I did not make your last change ("SIP end users" rather than
> just "end users") since the change would not address policy
> regarding exchange of early media between a SIP UAS end user
> and a PSTN end user, which would otherwise be possible.
> I hope this is acceptable.
>
> I include both a doc version with change marks and a txt
> version, both dated tomorrow. If the changes are acceptable,
> the text version should be final by deleting "-d2" from the
> file name.
>
> Thanks and BR, Richard
Now I have in fact found the time to take a closer look at the
-04-d2 version earlier than expected.
Thanks for all the improvements. It's really much more clear and
understandable now, and using good, standards-conformant language.
In only have one single proposal for clarification.
It's a bit unfortunate that "180 Ringing" is such impressive,
but in fact is a ringing indication fed back to the caller,
(traditionally called *ringback* in PSTN parlance), but that
can't be changed any more, naturally.
Therefore, in the first sentence of section 4.1, please replace
... such as ringing,
--
... such as ringing feedback ("ringback"),
(or similar).
Later places in the text (Sections 6 ff.) already contain similar
language with "180 Ringing".
I have no more other technical or editorial objections or change
recommendations and recommend to accept the draft now for
publication as an Informational RFC.
Kind Regards,
Alfred.
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