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reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Document: draft-ietf-sieve-body-06.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 21 June 2007
IETF LC End Date: 13 June 2007
IESG Telechat date: (if known) -
Summary:
Ready for the IESG. There are a couple of minor nits that
can be fixed by the RFc Editor.
Aside: This is almost certainly irrelevant to this document but has any
thought been given to how this will interact with email internationalization?
Comments:
Minor issues:
ss3 and 4 refer to 'matching text' but in practice the matches can be against
arbitrary octet strings in content types that aren't text. Use 'matching content'
instead?
A pointer is given to the SIEVE base document, but I wonder if this document
should note that ABNF is used to specify syntax and provide the appropriate
reference.
Editorial:
Section headings: Require capitalization of most words.
It won't be new or proposed once this becomes an RFC...
Abstract: s/a new command/an additional command/
s1: s/The proposed "body" test/The "body" test defined in this document/
s3 heading: Maybe '3. "Body" Test' rather than '3. Test body'?
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