Gonzalo -

Thanks for your review.

> Pages in this draft seem to be longer than the 58-line limit.

Haven't figured out how to fix my script.  However the RFC editor will
reformat it anyways.

> Acronyms need to be expanded on their first use (i.e., both the acronym
> and its expansion need to appear together) even in the Abstract (MPLS
> and FEC).

Hum - thought I had.  Just noticed that I expanded FEC, but not on the
first occurance.  I'll take a careful look for others.  If you happened
to have noted others, please pass them along.

Thanks,

...George

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George Swallow             Cisco Systems                  (978) 936-1398
                           1414 Massachusetts Avenue
                           Boxborough, MA 01719


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