Gonzalo -
Thanks for your review.
> Pages in this draft seem to be longer than the 58-line limit.
Haven't figured out how to fix my script. However the RFC editor will
reformat it anyways.
> Acronyms need to be expanded on their first use (i.e., both the acronym
> and its expansion need to appear together) even in the Abstract (MPLS
> and FEC).
Hum - thought I had. Just noticed that I expanded FEC, but not on the
first occurance. I'll take a careful look for others. If you happened
to have noted others, please pass them along.
Thanks,
...George
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