I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-carlberg-trip-attribute-rp-02 Reviewer: Pasi Eronen Review Date: 17 August 2007 IESG Telechat date: 23 August 2007 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: 1) The document is intended for Proposed Standard, but has a normative reference to an Informational RFC (RFC 2871), which was not explicitly mentioned in last call. However, RFC 2871 is a "framework" document, not a protocol specification, so I don't see any problem in having this reference (or changing it to Informative). 2) Editorial nits: idnits: "The document seems to lack a both a reference to RFC 2119 and the recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even if it appears to use RFC 2119 keywords." The acronym "TRIP" should be expanded in document title and abstract. Some of the references have been obsoleted by newer documents: RFC 1771 -> RFC 4271 ANSI T1.631 -> ATIS 1000631 (probably) H.460.4 (11/02) -> H.460.4 (01/07) (the title changed slightly, too) Some formatting weirdness, e.g. justified text alignment (but the RFC Editor will fix that). Best regards, Pasi _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
