I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-crispin-collation-unicasemap-06 Reviewer: Christian Vogt Review Date: August 21, 2007 IESG Telechat date: August 23, 2007 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: The document describes the collation algorithm for the Unicode casemap in section 1. This section ends with an applicability statement for the algorithm. It says that, while the algorithm is well-suited for technical languages, it does not work correctly in certain cases when applied to natural language. My suggestion is to move the applicability statement to a more prominent place, perhaps into a new section preceding current section 1. Moreover, I had previously reviewed version 04 of the document, and those comments have been addressed appropriately in the meantime. This earlier review is available here: http://www1.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg02027.html Finally, 3rd paragraph of section 1: s/using using/using/ Kind regards, - Christian _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
