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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Document: draft-ietf-mip6-vsm-01.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Review Date: 2007-09-06
IETF LC End Date: 2007-09-12
IESG Telechat: 2007-09-20
Summary: This document is ready for publication as a proposed standard RFC
Comments: Perhaps the only minor comment is to name the IANA registries
by their name. For example:
- In the description of the Vendor ID:
Vendor ID
The SMI Network Management Private Enterprise Code of the IANA
maintained Private Enterprise Numbers registry.
- In Section 5:
This document instructs IANA to allocate a value to the Vendor
Specific mobility option of the Mobility Options registry created by RFC
3775 [2].
Value Description Reference
----- --------------------------- ---------
x Vendor Specific Option [RFC XXXX]
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia tel:+358-50-4804586
Nokia Siemens Networks Espoo, Finland
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