Updating my Gen-ART Last Call review: My comment #2 is addressed by the RFC Editor note currently in the tracker; and comment #3 has been taken care of as well.
Comment #1 could be addressed by RFC Editor note, too, as suggested by the authors (email from Jean-Louis Le Roux on May 30th): > So we will remove the sentence "[IS-IS-CAP] defines a > new code point registry for sub-TLVs carried in the ISIS > CAPABILITY TLV" and replace by "IANA has defined a registry > for sub-TLVs of the IS-IS CAPABILITY TLV" Best regards, Pasi > -----Original Message----- > From: Eronen Pasi (Nokia-NRC/Helsinki) > Sent: 30 May, 2007 12:50 > To: '[email protected]'; '[EMAIL PROTECTED]'; > '[EMAIL PROTECTED]'; '[EMAIL PROTECTED]'; > '[EMAIL PROTECTED]' > Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-te-node-cap-05 > > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call > comments you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-te-node-cap-05 > Reviewer: Pasi Eronen > Review Date: 30 May 2007 > IETF LC End Date: 06 June 2007 > IESG Telechat date: (not known yet) > > Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits > that should be fixed before publication. > > Comments: > > 1) Section 8.2 "[IS-IS-CAP] defines a new code point registry for > sub-TLVs carried in the ISIS CAPABILITY TLV". The current version of > [IS-IS-CAP] does not seem to define any new IANA-maintained > registries. This may be an bug in [IS-IS-CAP]? > > 2) Section 8.3: the bit numbers in this section don't match the bit > numbers in Sections 4.1/4.2. > > 3) As noted in the proto write-up, there's a normative downref (RFC > 3784). This downref was not called out in the IETF last call message, > and it's not listed in the downref registry. > > Best regards, > Pasi > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
