have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) extension for Partial
Notification of Presence Information
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 13-Oct-2007
IETF LC End Date: N/A
IESG Telechat date: 2007-10-18
Summary: This document appears ready for publication as a proposed standard.
Comments: If a revision of the document will be produced, the
following comment should be considered.
Minor:
In the description of the Basic presence agent operation
(section 3.1) The text says that the full PIDF is sent if there is no
Accept header (right) or if "the Accept header contains the default
PIDF content type." For interoperability, a client who provides an
Accept header will almost always include the default (pidf+xml)
application content type in its Accept header. In fact, clients who
use this document are required to include that.
I believe that the sentence intended to say that if the only
value in the Accept header that is supported by the Presentitiy is
the default, then the full PDIF document will be sent.
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