Thanks for your review! Mark, perhaps these issues could be placed as RFC Editor notes in the tracker?
Jari [EMAIL PROTECTED] kirjoitti: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > > Document: draft-ietf-eap-netsel-problem-08.txt > Reviewer: David L. Black > Review Date: 19 October 2007 > IETF LC End Date: 22 October 2007 > > Summary: > > This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits > that should be fixed before publication. > > Comments: > > The nits are very minor - this draft is in very good shape. > > Typo: 2nd paragraph of Section 2.3.2: > > In Figure 2, Roaming Groups 1 and 3 both include ... > | > Change "3" to "2" -------------------/ > > idnits 2.04.16 found a few very minor nits: > > There's an extra space between "Standard" and "for" in > the first line of the [IEEE.802.11v] reference > > == Outdated reference: A later version (-15) exists of > draft-tschofenig-eap-ikev2-13 > > == Outdated reference: A later version (-01) exists of > draft-ohba-802dot21-basic-schema-00 > > > Thanks, > --David > ---------------------------------------------------- > David L. Black, Senior Technologist > EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 > +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 > [EMAIL PROTECTED] Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 > ---------------------------------------------------- > > > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
