Hi,

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.


Draft: draft-ietf-pwe3-pw-mib-12.txt
Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Review Date: 2 November 2007


Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as a PS RFC.


Comments:

MIB: the acronym and its expansion appear together in the Introduction.
The could also appear together in the title and the abstract (right now,
only the expansion appears there).


Thanks,

Gonzalo




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