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Document: draft-ietf-sigtran-rfc4233update-02
Reviewer: Christian Vogt
Review Date: 15 Nov 2007
IESG Telechat date: 15 Nov 2007
Summary: Ready for publication after this nit.
Comments:
This document updates RFC 4233 ("Integrated Services Digital Network
(ISDN) Q.921-User Adaptation Layer"). It changes a message type code to
resolve a type code collision.
After re-reading this document (I had some comments during an earlier
Gen-ART review round), I think you guys should change the abstract and
introduction to the following text. It's easier to parse:
This document resolves a message type code collision in the
Integrated Services Digital Network (ISDN) Q.921-User Adaptation
Layer (IUA) protocol [RFC3057]. It changes the message type code of
the TEI Query Request message [RFC4233] from 5 to 8. The value of 5
is already used by a Data Link Connection (DLC) Status message
defined in the Digital Private Network Signaling System (DPNSS)
/Digital Access Signaling System 2 (DASS 2) extensions [RFC4129] to
the IUA protocol, whereas the value of 8 is currently unassigned.
Feel free to copy and paste.
One more nit in section 6:
s/Christian Vogel/Christian Vogt/ 8-)
Regards,
- Christian
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