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Document: draft-ietf-rmt-bb-fec-rs-05.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 23 November 2007
IESG Telechat date: 29 November 2007
Summary:
Ready for Proposed Standard. There are a few editorial nits to feed to the RFC
Editor.
Caveat: I am not skilled in the FEC art and although I have enough maths to
understand what is going on I have not been able to check that the descriptions
in ss8.1-8.3 are (sufficiently) complete and correct.
Comments:
The current version has addressed all my comments from the last call review.
Editorial:
s9.2.1: s/packet per packet/packet-by-packet/, s/Even if we mention these
attacks/Although these attacks are described/
s9.2.2, para 1: s/may be in some case/may be in some cases/
s9.2.2, TESLA bullet: s/Yet/However/
s9.2.2, last para: s/Nonetheless, in case there is any concern of the threat of
object corruption/Nonetheless, if there is any risk of object corruption/
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