I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: Certificate Management Messages over CMS
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 25-November-2007
IETF LC End Date: 3-December-2007
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: This document appears ready for publication as a proposed
standard.
Comments:
While I believe I understood enough to make the above recommendation as
a generalist, I won't swear I got it all. For example, the material on
linking PoP and Identity is somewhat opaque to this reader. I believe
it works, and I think it addresses the problem identified, but I think
the wording could be clearer. Not enough to be worth revising.
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