Hi, Thanks for your review.
I have no problem with adding a Section "1.1 Terminology" and having its contents be the last paragraph of current Section 1. Thanks, Donald -----Original Message----- From: Miguel Garcia [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Monday, November 26, 2007 7:17 AM To: Eastlake III Donald-LDE008; [EMAIL PROTECTED] Cc: General Area Review Team Subject: Gen-ART review of IETF LC draft-ietf-dnsext-2929bis-06.txt I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-dnsext-2929bis-06.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Review Date: 2007-11-26 IETF LC End Date: 2007-12-03 IESG Telechat date: 2007-12-13 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a BCP. Comments: The only comment I have is with respect to the last paragraph in Section 1. This paragraph is about the terminology rather than an introduction, so I would have placed it in a separate "Terminology" section. I don't have further comments. /Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia tel:+358-50-4804586 Nokia Siemens Networks Espoo, Finland _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
