Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-ietf-pkix-cmc-trans-06.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Review Date: 28 November 2007 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: There are a few acronyms that are not expanded on their first use. The text about RFC 2119 language is in the Overview section. A Terminology section would be a better place for it. The draft talks about TLS but does not have a reference to the TLS spec. The draft mentions RFC 2616 but does not include a reference to it. The draft uses different reference styles: [RFC2119] for RFC 2119, but [SMIMEv3] for RFC 3851. The draft lacks an IANA Considerations Section. The reference [SIMPLEv2] is defined by never used. Thanks, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
