I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-sip-uri-list-conferencing-02.txt
For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: Ready for publication. Comments ======== This draft is well written and easy to read, but if I had to change just one thing, it would be the abstract. It does not convey the fact that this method is used to setup a conference much faster than the prior methods. I feel something along the lines of This document describes a mechanism for quickly creating a conference using SIP URI-list services. It achieves faster conference establishment times be allowing a user agent client to provide a conference server with the initial list of participants using an INVITE-contained URI-list. conveys the purpose in a clearer fashion. Thanks Suresh _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
