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Document: draft-evain-ebu-urn-02.txt
Reviewer: David L. Black
Review Date: January 18, 2008
IESG Telechat date: 24 Jan 2008
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.
Comments:
The minor open issue and most of the nits identified in the
Gen-ART review of the -01 version of this draft have been
addressed in the -02 version.
idnits 2.05.03 found two nits:
Checking boilerplate required by RFC 3978 and 3979, updated by RFC 4748:
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** The document seems to lack an RFC 3978 Section 5.5 (updated by RFC
4748)
Disclaimer -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching
beginning.
Boilerplate error?
Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:
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** There are 2 instances of too long lines in the document, the
longest one
being 2 characters in excess of 72.
Thanks,
--David
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