Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-ietf-mip4-nemo-v4-base-08.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Review Date: 8 February 2008 IETF LC Date: 5 April 2006 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a PS RFC. Comments: In the Introduction, the draft refers to itself as "this draft". Something like "this specification" would be better. Thanks, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] http://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
