Hi Vijay,
thank you for your suggestion.
Though I'm far from being a wordsmith, I got that your text
clarifies your points of concern better.
Thank you. :)
Vijay K. Gurbani wrote:
> Arifumi Matsumoto wrote:
>> Some of these are not new and not introduced by one or multiple
>> address-selection mechanisms.
>>
>> However, all the items in the lists in S3.1 are the threats that are
>> new and specific to the address-selection mechanisms in a sense.
>
> Ah, OK. In that case, to answer your next question:
>
>> How should we describe such a case in the security consideration
>> section ?
>
> I will float some suggested text that you are more than welcome
> to wordsmith:
>
> OLD:
> 3.1. List of threats introduced by new address-selection mechanism
>
> There are some security incidents when combining these
> requirements described in Section 2 into a protocol. In
> particular, here are six possible threats.
>
> NEW:
> 3.1. List of threats introduced by new address-selection mechanism
>
> The need to address the requirements described in Section 2
> into a protocol may expose such a protocol to new threats.
> In particular, here are six possible threats that such a
> protocol may be vulnerable to:
>
> Thanks,
>
> - vijay
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Arifumi Matsumoto
IP Technology Expert Team
Secure Communication Project
NTT Information Sharing Platform Laboratories
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