I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-mipshop-3gfh-05.txt Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 4 Mar 2008 IESG Telechat date: 15 Mar 2008 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational. A couple of nits below. - The TBD in S6.2 is accounted for in the IANA considerations. But the TBD in S6.1 is not. - S3: You may want to consider listing the terminology alphabetically. Will make it easier for neophytes to find. That's it. Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 2701 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9F-546, Lisle, Illinois 60532 (USA) Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED],bell-labs.com,acm.org} WWW: http://www.alcatel-lucent.com/bell-labs _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
