I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-l1vpn-basic-mode-04.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is ready for publication but I have a suggestion. References ========== The following text occurs in the conventions section of the document. "This document expects that the reader is familiar with the terminology defined and used in [RFC3945], [RFC3471], [RFC3473], [RFC3477], [RFC4201], [RFC4202], [RFC4204], [RFC4208] and referenced therein." Since it is mandatory to read these documents all of them need to be perhaps moved into normative references. Also I feel that this text belongs better in the Introduction section than in the Conventions. Cheers Suresh _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
