I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-mip4-vpn-problem-solution-05.txt Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 30 Mar 2008 IESG Telechat date: 31 Mar 2008 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Proposed Standard. Couple of nits follow: - S1.6, page 9: s/abovementioned/above mentioned - S3.2.4, last paragraph: s/untypical/atypical - S5.2, last bullet item: I could not quite follow the logic of how the bytes add up to 20. But that may be my unfamiliarity with the domain. I simply want to get the authors attention here in case there is something of consequence. If there is not, then please feel free to discard this comment. Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 2701 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9F-546, Lisle, Illinois 60532 (USA) Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED],bell-labs.com,acm.org} WWW: http://www.alcatel-lucent.com/bell-labs _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
