I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
comments you may receive.
Document..........: draft-ietf-bfd-v4v6-1hop-08
Reviewer..........: Christian Vogt
Review date.......: 2008/06/04
IESG Telechat date: 2008/06/05
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has 1 nit
that should be fixed before publication.
Comments:
This draft describes the use of Bidirectional Forwarding Detection
protocol over single IP hops, for both IPv4 and IPv6. The document is
well-written, and I have no objections for publishing it.
One small nit, still: Please clarify the 2nd paragraph in section 2:
Each BFD session between a pair of systems MUST traverse a separate
path in both directions.
I am assuming that "path" here is a BFD-specific term, but the message
of this sentence is unclear to me.
- Christian
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