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Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-pw-mpls-mib-14.txt
Pseudowire (PW) over MPLS PSN Management Information Base (MIB)
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 13-June-2008
IETF LC End Date: 24-June-2008
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
Some minor items should be addressed during final editing.
Comments:
I realize PSN is commonly used in many discussions. But it is not so
common and wide-spread as to not benefit from definition. Please, the
first time PSN is used in the text, include the expansion of the
acronym. (It is particularly odd that the RFC 30301 is described as
defining the architecture for MPLS PSN, but does not actually use the
string "PSN" anywhere.)
Should the comments line, pointing to the pwe3 email list, be part of
the final RFC?
typo: pwTbale ? (in section 7)
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