On Wed, Jun 25, 2008 at 01:41:35PM +1200, Brian E Carpenter wrote:

> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
> for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-snmp-engineid-discovery-02.txt
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review Date: 2008-06-25
> IETF LC End Date: 2008-06-30
> IESG Telechat date: (if known)
> 
> Summary: Almost ready
> 
> Comments: 
> 
> ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2434 (Obsoleted by RFC 5226)

easy fix
 
> 5.  Security Considerations
> ...
>    If a device configuration permits non-secure SNMPv1/v2c access to a
>    target system, then reading the snmpEngineID variable of the SNMP-
>    FRAMEWORK-MIB will also reveal a suitable contextEngineID value for
>    subsequent SNMPv3 usage.  However, implementations should not rely on
>    non-secure SNMPv1/v2c access and therefore MUST implement this
>    specification to enable secure contextEngineID discovery.
> 
> This is a little odd, since, as the previous paragraph indicates,
> the localEngineID mechanism is not intrinsically secure. I think the
> second sentence should be extended to:
> 
>                              However, implementations should not rely on
>    non-secure SNMPv1/v2c access and therefore MUST implement this
>    specification to enable secure contextEngineID discovery whenever
>    an SNMPv3 security mechanism is in use.

The paragraph in question establishes an implementation requirement.
Your proposed addition "whenever an SNMPv3 security mechanisms is in
use" hints to a deployment decision, which for me does not go along
with an implementation requirement.

/js

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