Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Draft: draft-ietf-capwap-threat-analysis-04.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Review Date: 25 September 2008 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: The acronym CAPWAP should be expanded in the title of the draft. The draft uses capitalized RFC 2119 language without referencing RFC 2119. Given that this is an informational document, it may be OK to do so, but this is something the AD should decide. RFC 4017 is defined as an Informative Reference but is not used anywhere in the text. The ID Nits tool complains about a too long line (i.e., longer than 72 characters). Thanks, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
