Jamal,
The latest version is fine with me... Thanks!
--
Eric Gray
Principal Engineer
Ericsson
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jamal Hadi Salim [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> Sent: Friday, October 03, 2008 2:48 PM
> To: Eric Gray
> Cc: Ross Callon
> Subject: RE: Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-forces-protocol-15
> Importance: High
>
> Eric,
>
> Did you get the chance to look at that update?
>
> cheers,
> jamal
>
> On Thu, 2008-25-09 at 05:56 -0400, Jamal Hadi Salim wrote:
> > Hi Eric,
> >
> > We have uploaded a new version.
> > For a diff with the one you reviewed below:
> >
> http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=http://tools.ietf.org/id/dr
> aft-ietf-forces-protocol-17.txt
> >
> > cheers,
> > jamal
> >
> > On Mon, 2008-22-09 at 08:22 -0500, Eric Gray wrote:
> > > Jamal,
> > >
> > > Looks very good, with the exception of a couple of NITs in 4.2
> > >
> > > ---
> > >
> > > In section 4.2, you have "Pre-Association" and "post-association"
> > > (inconsistent capitalization). In all other places,
> pre-association
> > > is not capitalized (except that "Pre" is if starting a sentence).
> > >
> > > Also, block labels in Figure 4 are "FE Pre-Association Phase" and
> > > "FE Associated" - the second one should probably be changed to:
> > >
> > > "FE Post-Association Phase"
> > >
> > > ---
> > >
> > > --
> > > Eric Gray
> > > Principal Engineer
> > > Ericsson
> > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: Jamal Hadi Salim [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> > > > Sent: Sunday, September 21, 2008 8:30 AM
> > > > To: Eric Gray
> > > > Cc: Ross Callon
> > > > Subject: RE: Gen-ART Last Call Review of
> draft-ietf-forces-protocol-15
> > > > Importance: High
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Eric,
> > > > Since we havent published with the 2 changes, so as to
> avoid poor
> > > > synchronization:
> > > > I think the best thing to do is to wait for your response
> > > > and then make any changes on top, publish and get you to review
> > > > (hopefully only those two changes).
> > > >
> > > > cheers,
> > > > jamal
> > > >
> > > > On Tue, 2008-16-09 at 22:00 -0500, Eric Gray wrote:
> > > > > Jamal,
> > > > >
> > > > > The bad news is that - while this is both
> pretty and pretty
> > > > > useful - my work computer has not the screen-size
> needed for me to
> > > > > be able to use this tool effectively (I can only see
> the left 2/3
> > > > > of the resulting "diff" output). The good news is
> that I brought
> > > > > along my personal computer - as I often do exactly
> for this reason
> > > > > - so I can take a look at this on that computer when
> I get back to
> > > > > my room.
> > > > >
> > > > > Of course, that happens after this meeting
> ends, and I meet
> > > > > with a few of the people over dinner, and get back to
> my room. I
> > > > > would not like to spend too much time on it after -
> say - about 9
> > > > > PM, so that does not leave a lot of time to get it done.
> > > > >
> > > > > But - who knows - maybe it will be enough.
> Provided I don't
> > > > > have too many more conference calls with my
> cooleagues in the US,
> > > > > that tend to be at rediculous hours in the late
> evening, or early
> > > > > morning, for me here in Korea.
> > > > >
> > > > > --
> > > > > Eric Gray
> > > > > Principal Engineer
> > > > > Ericsson
> > > > >
> > > > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > > > From: Jamal Hadi Salim [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> > > > > > Sent: Tuesday, September 16, 2008 10:39 PM
> > > > > > To: Eric Gray
> > > > > > Cc: Ross Callon
> > > > > > Subject: RE: Gen-ART Last Call Review of
> > > > draft-ietf-forces-protocol-15
> > > > > > Importance: High
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Eric,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > There is one really quick way to check for changes made
> > > > that i always
> > > > > > find useful - and that is to use the webtools diff
> tool. For
> > > > > > example, if
> > > > > > you go to:
> > > > > > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-forces-protocol-16
> > > > > > then click on "diff2" on the top-right-hand corner, it lays
> > > > > > out in a nice format the previous and current drafts...
> > > > > >
> > > > > > You probably already know this - just thought id share it
> > > > > > incase you didnt.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > cheers,
> > > > > > jamal
> > > > > >
> > > > > > On Tue, 2008-16-09 at 21:17 -0500, Eric Gray wrote:
> > > > > > > Ross,
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > This is a lengthy specification, and I am in Korea for
> > > > > > > an IEEE meeting. So I will not finish a complete
> re-review
> > > > > > > in the next day or so, anyway.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > I would prefer to start with what Jamal has already
> > > > > > > posted and then give a quick once-over for changes Jamal
> > > > > > > mentions are required to address Elwyn's comments. I kind
> > > > > > > of doubt all of this will get done before the
> telechat - if
> > > > > > > it is this week. If it is next week, you should
> have heard
> > > > > > > from me before then...
> > > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > >
> > > >
>
>
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