I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-tcpm-rfc4138bis-04.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Review Date: 2008-11-03
IETF LC End Date: 2008-11-13
Summary: The draft is ready for publication as a proposed standard RFC.
Comments: The document is clear and well written. Just nits:
- Expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: RTO, MSS
- You don't need to expand the well known term "TCP". But if you do it,
it should also be at first occurrence.
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain
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