I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see _http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html_).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-smime-3850bis-08.txt Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 25 Nov 2008 IETF LC End Date: 13 Nov 2008 IESG Telechat date: (if known) - Summary: This document is ready for the IESG give or take a few minor editorial nits and the posible requirement for longer key support. Caveat: I do not have a really informed view on the cryptographic minimums. However it would seem that support for 2048 bit keys should be at least a SHOULD+ in this version if the RSA house view is cirrect (http://www.rsa.com/rsalabs/node.asp?id=2004). Editorial nits: - There are a number of acronyms that are not expanded (RSA, DSA, PKCS were spotted). Some of these may be considered to be well known within security circles. s1: It would probably be good tpo mention that this doc is aimed at v3.2 of S/MIME. s4.2: s/ex:/e.g.,/ 2 places s4.2, para 3: s/certificates are included/certificates that are included/ s4.3, (next next) and next last para: s/The first reference/In each case, the first reference/ (2 places) s4.4.1, para 2: s/to performing/when performing/ _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
