I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-source-attributes-02.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2009-02-05 IETF LC End Date: 2009-02-09 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1: The Session Description Protocol -> ... (SDP) - 3 page 4: receivers (who may never -> receivers (which may never - 3 page 4 (twice): i.e. -> i.e., - 4 page 5: synchronizaton -> synchronization - 9 page 12: defintion -> definition - 10 page 12: 0 - 2**32 - 1 -> 0 .. 2**32 - 1 - 12.3 page 15: gropuing -> grouping - Authors' page 18: NJ 07601, US -> NJ 07601, USA Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
