I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-xcon-event-package-01.txt Reviewer: Pete McCann Review Date: 2009-02-09 IETF LC End Date: 2009-02-10 IESG Telechat date: (not known) Summary: Ready with a few minor nits. Major issues: None Minor issues: Section 5.1 contains the following text: When the server receives a SUBSCRIBE request (refresh or termination) within the associated subscription, it SHOULD send a NOTIFY request containing the full document using the 'application/ xcon-conference-info+xml' content type. Do you really want to send the full document upon termination of the subscription? Someone should check the XML with an automated tool to make sure it is syntactically correct. I did not do this. Nits/editorial comments: Section 3: OLD: conference instance has experimented NEW: conference instance has experienced Section 5.2: OLD: received in notification. NEW: received in the notification. OLD: If subscriber NEW: If the subscriber _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
