I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
draft-ietf-kitten-extended-mech-inquiry-06.txt
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Proposed Standard.
Substantial
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* Section 3.4.4
Shouldn't the output "name" be released with GSS_Release_buffer() as well?
Minor
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* The IANA considerations section describes the policy for future
allocations as "IESG Protocol Action". Is it possible to use a known
policy (Standards Action or IESG Approval, perhaps) for this?
* Section 3.4.3
GSS_Inquire_mech_attrs_for_mech() needs to be replaced by
GSS_Inquire_attrs_for_mech() as the former does not exist.
Editorial
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* Section 3.4.6:
Replace
"To avoid this error we hereby define new typdefs which
^^^^^^^
with
"To avoid this error we hereby define new typedefs which
* IANA Considerations
s/namsepace/namespace/
Thanks
Suresh
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