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Document: draft-ietf-enum-3761bis-04.txt
The E.164 to Uniform Resource Identifiers (URI) Dynamic Delegation
Discovery System (DDDS) Application (ENUM)
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 29-May-2009
IETF LC End Date: 7-June-2009
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: This document is ready for publication as a proposed standard.
The minor and editorial items noted below should be dealt with when
revision is needed.
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
Section 2 first paragraph has text which says "ENUM compliant
applications MUST only query DNS for what it believes is an E.164
number." I believe that the intend is "...must only query DNS using
the mechanisms described in this document..."
RFCs 2915 and 2916 should appear in the references, even though
they have been obsoleted, since the text refers to them several times.
In one case the text indicates that clients SHOULD support the obsolete
syntax.
Nits/editorial comments:
The text references RFC 3824, but that is not in the references.
I realize that the Guide and Template ... for Enumservices
reference will need to be replaced with an RFC reference before
publication. But finding the reference to draft -06, when the draft is
at -16 (and -06 is long expired) is confusing. (Off by 1, no big deal.
Off by 10, and for all the reader knows the content may have shifted
significantly.)
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