I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html> ).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-avt-rtp-mps-02 Reviewer: Pete McCann Review Date: 2 June 2009 IETF LC End Date: 2 June 2009 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. Major issues: Minor issues: Section 4.1: Note that the a=fmtp lines of the example above have been wrapped to fit the page; they comprise each a single line in the SDP file. There is only one a=fmtp line, your wording here seems to apply to each of the broken-up lines. Suggest changing to singular: Note that the a=fmtp line of the example above has been wrapped to fit the page; it would comprise a single line in the SDP file. Nits/editorial comments: _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
