I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-hollenbeck-rfc4932bis-01 Reviewer: Avshalom Houri Review Date: 2009-06-10 IETF LC End Date: 2009-06-11 IESG Telechat date: (not known) Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Full Standard Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Line 151: an internal host is subordinate relates to a domain within the -- The sentence needs to be rephrased. Thanks --Avshalom
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