Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-ietf-dime-qos-attributes-12.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[email protected]> Review Date: 24 June 2009 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a PS RFC. Comments: The acronyms AVP and ABNF could be expanded in the Abstract. In general, all acronyms need to be expanded on their first use. In general, Abstracts should not contain references. Consider removing the reference to RFC 4005 there. The ID nits tool says: There are 43 instances of lines with non-RFC3330-compliant IPv4 addresses in the document. If these are example addresses, they should be changed. Thanks, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
