At 08:06 AM 7/8/2009, Francis Dupont wrote:
Nits/editorial comments: I have still (cf review of the 06 version) two concerns about the Abstract: - the first sentence "This document obsoletes RFC 3330." belongs to the document meta-data and should be removed before publication
Many documents indicate this information in 3 places: - title page header - abstract - introduction
- the last sentence has an explicit reference to an RFC. It should be repeated in the introduction or perhaps moved to the introduction.
Abstract should only name the RFC, not include a reference.
Note the RFC Editor is in charge of the style of Abstract so these points should be discussed with him/her.
I agree that the RFC Editor can easily resolve these concerns. Russ _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
