Hi,
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Draft: raft-ietf-pwe3-mpls-transport-04
Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[email protected]>
Review Date: 20 July 2009
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
Comments:
All acronyms need to be expanded on their first use. This includes the
title and the abstract of the draft.
Generally, abstracts should not contain references. I suggest removing
the reference to RFC 4448 from it.
Thanks,
Gonzalo
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