I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-ntp-dhcpv6-ntp-opt-04.txt Reviewer: Sean Turner Review Date: 2009-08-12 IETF LC End Date: 2009-08-17 IESG Telechat date: 2009-08-27 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: I think an "obsoletes" document needs to include a section/appendix that summarizes what changed. It makes it much easier to figure out what changed. This is probably nitpicking but I prefer to have the introduction be the 1st paragraph (the RFC editor might require it). I suggest making Section 2 Section 1, Section 1 Section 2, Section 2.1 Section 3, and renumbering of the Sections accordingly. In section 4: r/To to enable/To enable _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
