I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-harkins-emu-eap-pwd-06.txt
For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Informational RFC but I have a few comments Substantial =========== Section 2.6.4.1 * It is possible that I missed something but I did not see the function "F" defined in this document. e.g. -> compute ks = F(KS) Minor ===== * IANA considerations : Random function The "Specification required" policy already implies use of a designated expert and hence the "and Expert Review" clause is not needed. * The word hunt-and-peck used in the document is not very well defined. I have seen this being used to describe inexperienced typists but I could not see how to apply the analogy to this EAP method. Thanks Suresh _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
