I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-operations-and-management-09.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[email protected]>
Review Date: 2009-09-21
IETF LC End Date: 2009-09-24
IESG Telechat date: 2009-09-24
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a BCP.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
I reviewed version 07 of this document. Most of my comments, which were
editorial, have been addressed. One not, so, here I reproduce my original
comment in case you need to update the document. The expansion of the
terms is not done yet.
- Expand acronyms at first occurrence and add a reference to them (if
there are documents). This includes: SNMP, SYSLOG, COPS, XML, RADIUS,
DIAMETER, NETCONF, IPFIX, DMTF, TMF, RMON, and NMS.
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
+34-91-339-3608
Ericsson Spain
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