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Document..........: draft-ietf-sipcore-presence-scaling-requirements-02
Reviewer..........: Christian Vogt
Review date.......: September 22, 2009
IESG Telechat date: September 24, 2009
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.
This document describes requirements for SIP/SIMPLE optimizations,
primarily to address scalability issues that have been observed for
SIP/SIMPLE deployments.
The document is well-written and concise, and it is basically ready for
publication. Two comments, though, which the authors may want to
consider:
- It would be worth mentioning in the introduction of the document what
the expected result of this document should be. Obviously, we are
expecting (or hoping for) an improvement in the scalability of
SIP/SIMPLE, but this should be made explicit. Also, do we have
estimates of how much SIP/SIMPLE will improve?
- The document only talks about "optimizations" to which the defined
requirement should apply. How about other types of protocol
enhancements, such as functional extensions? Wouldn't the defined
requirements apply to those just as well?
Good luck with the publication!
- Christian
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