--On Tuesday, October 13, 2009 16:36 -0500 Ben Campbell <[email protected]> wrote:
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). >... > Document: draft-ietf-idnabis-rationale-13 > Reviewer: Ben Campbell > Review Date: 2009-Oct-13 > IETF LC End Date: 2009-Oct-13 >... > Nits/editorial comments: > > -- Section 3.1.2.2, 2nd paragraph: > > This paragraph seems redundant with the preceding one. Stupid copy-and-paste error. Fixed. > -- Section 3.1.3, first bullet in list: > > Please expand NFKC on first use. I've done that, but the result is not satisfying (i.e., "NFKC" expands to "Normalization Method KC". This is a Unicode issue, not an IETF one. > -- section 7.1.1, first paragraph: "...defined in the > "Protocol" and "Tables" documents" > > Reference forms inconsistent with other references to these > same docs elsewhere in the draft. Sigh. I could try to explain why I did that, but I fixed it instead :-(. john _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
