Thanks for the comments, folded in to the working document. Will publish -05 when I get the rest of IETF last call comments.
Thanks again, Love 15 nov 2009 kl. 05:36 skrev Sean Turner: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for > this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these > comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. > > Document: draft-lha-gssapi-delegate-policy-04.txt > Reviewer: Sean Turner > Review Date: 2009-11-15 > IETF LC End Date: 2009-12-08 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that > should be fixed before publication > > Comments: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that > should be fixed before publication. > > Nits: > > Spell out CIFS on first occurance. It's not in the RFC Editor's > abbreviations list > (http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt). > > Sec 1: r/It would is desirable/It is desirable > > Sec 2: r/If the deleg_policy_req_flag is set, then delegation should be > performed if recommended by central policy./If the deleg_policy_req_flag is > set, then delegation SHOULD be performed if recommended by central policy. > > Sec 5: r/the MUST/they MUST > > spt _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
